"Alone" Synopsis by Moose42
- moose42
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Re: Chapter 28 of Moose42's "Alone"
Army for the helicopters. Oops I guess Gunny Sgt is only marines. DOH. Thanks, fixed.
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--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
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- moose42
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Re: Chapter 28 of Moose42's "Alone"
Chapter 29 enjoy.
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
- ButchS1066
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Re: Chapter 28 of Moose42's "Alone"
Had to laugh at the comments this chapter generated, I'd think the ideal cliffhanger ending was about four sentences back from where you stopped. 

Life is short, ammo is expendable. Empty the mag.
- moose42
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Re: Chapter 29 of Moose42's "Alone"
Chapter 30 is now available for your reading pleasure. And like I promised, "No new cliffhangers." 

Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
- randy
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"
Yeah, just the same old cliffhangers eh?
OBTW, it's "Lear Jet".
The Leer jet was the DC-9 Hugh Hefner had painted with the Playboy Rabbit on the tail.
OBTW, it's "Lear Jet".
The Leer jet was the DC-9 Hugh Hefner had painted with the Playboy Rabbit on the tail.
...even before I read MHI, my response to seeing a poster for the stars of the latest Twilight movies was "I see 2 targets and a collaborator".
- moose42
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"
Stop Leering at my Leer, err Lear jet. 

Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
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- AZMARK
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"



I'd like to be the FO for that mission:
"Shot"
"Splash"
"Holy shit, naked chicks"

My favorite story of his ended with "...and so he went out the back door in his bathrobe, flipped the AK to 'Afrikaner', and started hosing the baboons off his tennis court." - Tam
- moose42
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"
So I figured I would sketch some of the ships, I started off with the Masters Drop ship and skiffs but the pictures turned out crappy so I changed it to a Thii-Ru-Duun skiff.
I am a much better writer than an artist.
Bonus points if you can tell what real aircraft I used as a reference to start off with.

I am a much better writer than an artist.
Bonus points if you can tell what real aircraft I used as a reference to start off with.

Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
- Mud_Dog
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"
I'm gonna let SoupOrMan take that one, 'cuz I'm a nice guy like that.moose42 wrote: Bonus points if you can tell what real aircraft I used as a reference to start off with.

Obamalypse, Part II: The Armening. (-NPR)
- moose42
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Re: 30th Chapter of Moose42's "Alone"
Chapter 31
This chapter has some different turns, it went in a different direction than I had figured I would go, but I think it still fits. Anyway enjoy.
This chapter has some different turns, it went in a different direction than I had figured I would go, but I think it still fits. Anyway enjoy.
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One