"Alone" Synopsis by Moose42

Captain Wheelgun · Post by **Captain Wheelgun** » Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:52 am

moose42 wrote:Chapter 18 is up!

I think I almost lost my man card while writing this chapter.

Can I get a roll call of people who are reading this? I am just curious. Thanks.

Without you guys I wouldn't have started or continued writing.

Yep, still here, good work so far...

AZMARK · Post by **AZMARK** » Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:21 am

Still here & enjoying the story.

Durham68 · Post by **Durham68** » Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:09 pm

Man card or no man card, this was my favorite chapter yet as far as the story and characters were concerned. Loved it. I don't know about anyone else, but I get psyched when I see new chapters posted. I suspect there are more leaches like me enjoying your work without posting much feedback.

moose42 · Post by **moose42** » Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:34 am

Durham68 wrote:Man card or no man card, this was my favorite chapter yet as far as the story and characters were concerned. Loved it. I don't know about anyone else, but I get psyched when I see new chapters posted. I suspect there are more leaches like me enjoying your work without posting much feedback.

Thanks. I was curious because I was getting a bunch of hits on the Blog but silence here. Thanks for reading. I am glad that you get psyched to read my amateur work of fiction. I would really like to go somewhere with this work but even if I don't the journey will be worth it. Oh and the fact that I have fans that salivate every time I post "Chapter ## is up."

JKosprey · Post by **JKosprey** » Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:06 am

still here as well

Durham68 · Post by **Durham68** » Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:55 am

moose42 wrote: I would really like to go somewhere with this work but even if I don't the journey will be worth it.

I don't know the first thing about how someone goes anywhere as an author, but your writing has certainly improved a ton since the first chapters of MH:MB.

moose42 · Post by **moose42** » Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:53 am

Durham68 wrote:
moose42 wrote: I would really like to go somewhere with this work but even if I don't the journey will be worth it.
I don't know the first thing about how someone goes anywhere as an author, but your writing has certainly improved a ton since the first chapters of MH:MB.

Thanks, I just hope it was better than this...

I really think that MH:MB was a good sandbox for me to plan in and get some practice writing so I could move on to my own new stories. Thanks Larry Correia.

I think Jerry Pournelle summed it up like this.

...the secret of success in becoming a writer is you must write; you must finish what you write; and you must write a lot more.

Oh chapter updates... Umm I have 2 paragraphs of Chapter 19 written.

I can't promise anything this week being Christmas and all, But I will try.

moose42 · Post by **moose42** » Thu Dec 24, 2009 5:55 am

Chapter 19

Well guys here you go. It is a bit short so I might add on to it later but I'm not sure yet.
We meet some more people and aliens. Enjoy.

Dedicated_Dad · Post by **Dedicated_Dad** » Thu Dec 24, 2009 7:31 pm

I'm reading too - been following at the blog.

Good stuff - keep it coming!

DD

George guy · Post by **George guy** » Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:43 am

It's quite good. It's hard to come up with much to say about it, except that I look forward to each new chapter.

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