Magic Ink by Moose42

[moose42]

Magic Ink is a [strike]short[/strike] fantasy story from another Writing Excuses writing prompt.

This isn't your typical fantasy story though.

Feedback would be appreciated.

Oh if you think part of my story is far fetched, it's not too far from the truth. And so what it's fantasy!

[Mud_Dog]

Interesting, I'm not very good at critiquing so not much I can add of any value. Looking forward to reading more of it though!

[Aaron]

Seems pretty good so far. I'm guessing the extremely conversational style first person narrative within generous humor interlaced is intentional. In that case, you're pulling it off. I laughed out loud a couple times.

[moose42]

Seems pretty good so far. I'm guessing the extremely conversational style first person narrative within generous humor interlaced is intentional. In that case, you're pulling it off. I laughed out loud a couple times.

Tryin' something different.

[moose42]

What started out as a simple exercise from a Writing Excuses prompt has now become a monster. A monster full of air to air combat, with flintlocks, grapeshot, and firebombs!

Magic Ink Chapter 2

[Aaron]

Don't feel bad. What started as a diversion during a run of writer's block (I swear the next installment of Prayer's of a Spacer is coming along) turned into a whole 'nother writing project with pirates as the heroes and a vast, complicated diatribe on corporatism and authoritarianist creep.

[moose42]

Magic Ink Chapter 3 is now available.

So what do you all think?

[moose42]

Magic Ink Chapter 4 is now available for your reading pleasure. As always feedback, and suggestions are appreciated.

Victor and company run into some more trouble.

[Mud_Dog]

This free Ice Cream is delicious! Keep up the good work!

[moose42]

This free Ice Cream is delicious! Keep up the good work!

It's delicious until your teeth fall out.

I am glad you guys are enjoying it. Because if I'm the only person who enjoys it what's the point?