Alone 2 by Moose42
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Re: Alone 2 by Moose42
Any clue where to find it?
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Sorry guys. I probably should have told you what I've done recently.
I am planning on submitting Alone 1 to a publisher in a week or two, so I pulled all of Alone 2 off the website, and all but the first seven chapters of alone 1.
I just don't want any more reasons for the editors to kick my manuscript to the curb.
I'll post chapter five of Alone 2 here temporarily for a few days if you'd like.
I'm sorry guys for the confusion I really am. But from what I've read editors don't like whole manuscripts posted on public websites. Sorry.
I know I probably have a snowballs chance on a BBQ grill, but you know how it is.
I haven't been writing much new content on any of my stories because I've been concentrating so much on the Alone 1 rewrite.
Anyway here's Chapter 5. (I re-posted it.)
I also started on Chapter 6.
I am planning on submitting Alone 1 to a publisher in a week or two, so I pulled all of Alone 2 off the website, and all but the first seven chapters of alone 1.
I just don't want any more reasons for the editors to kick my manuscript to the curb.
I'll post chapter five of Alone 2 here temporarily for a few days if you'd like.
I'm sorry guys for the confusion I really am. But from what I've read editors don't like whole manuscripts posted on public websites. Sorry.
I know I probably have a snowballs chance on a BBQ grill, but you know how it is.
I haven't been writing much new content on any of my stories because I've been concentrating so much on the Alone 1 rewrite.
Anyway here's Chapter 5. (I re-posted it.)
I also started on Chapter 6.
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Alone: King of One
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Re: Alone 2 by Moose42
moose42 wrote: Anyway here's Chapter 5. Chapter 6 is still a blank page.![]()




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Re: Alone 2 by Moose42
Chapter 6... need I say more?
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
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Re: Alone 2 by Moose42
I appreciate it...
On the "Publisher" front, have you contacted Baen?
Another thought -- see http://theamericanapocalypse.blogspot.com/ .
In addition to being a GREAT read, "NoVa" has also recently managed to get his stuff published by someone -- might want to contact him...
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On the "Publisher" front, have you contacted Baen?
Another thought -- see http://theamericanapocalypse.blogspot.com/ .
In addition to being a GREAT read, "NoVa" has also recently managed to get his stuff published by someone -- might want to contact him...
A
workinwifdakids wrote:MV Gun Counter: "We're like Blackwater, except without the impulse control."
Random Internet Moron wrote: "High Caliber Magazine Clips are only useful for random slaughter of innocent civilians, so they should only be used by the police."
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Re: Alone 2 by Moose42
I haven't contacted Baen yet. I'm going to be sitting down with a published author next week to go over a few things before I submit.
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One