Alone 2 by Moose42

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Any clue where to find it?
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Sorry guys. I probably should have told you what I've done recently.

I am planning on submitting Alone 1 to a publisher in a week or two, so I pulled all of Alone 2 off the website, and all but the first seven chapters of alone 1.

I just don't want any more reasons for the editors to kick my manuscript to the curb.

I'll post chapter five of Alone 2 here temporarily for a few days if you'd like.

I'm sorry guys for the confusion I really am. But from what I've read editors don't like whole manuscripts posted on public websites. Sorry.

I know I probably have a snowballs chance on a BBQ grill, but you know how it is.

I haven't been writing much new content on any of my stories because I've been concentrating so much on the Alone 1 rewrite.

Anyway here's Chapter 5. (I re-posted it.)

I also started on Chapter 6.
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moose42 wrote: Anyway here's Chapter 5. Chapter 6 is still a blank page. :(
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Chapter 6... need I say more?
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Sweet! :P
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I appreciate it...

On the "Publisher" front, have you contacted Baen?

Another thought -- see http://theamericanapocalypse.blogspot.com/ .

In addition to being a GREAT read, "NoVa" has also recently managed to get his stuff published by someone -- might want to contact him...

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I haven't contacted Baen yet. I'm going to be sitting down with a published author next week to go over a few things before I submit.
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