The Gun Counter

Years ago in another life, (Junior High?) I wrote a short story for a creative writing class called "Ogre Here, Ogre There, Ogre Everywhere." I should try and find it. Anyway it was about a two headed Ogre and had some magic mixed with hack and slash in it. I really don't remember that much about it but after reading Khorne's fantasy story on WeTheArmed.com whose protagonist is a Naga (Medusa) I decided to resurrect this story.

Ogre Chapter 1

Enjoy. Oh I really want feedback on this one seeing as its a complete departure from anything else I've posted before.

Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".

Flintlock Tom wrote:Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".

What can I say I've got ADD, hey look a quarter! What were we talking about?

Oh yes, I needed a break from Alone for a bit, and ohh did you mention "A Girl and Her Bot?" Man I need to work on that one some more too. No! Must RESIST. Must FINISH Alone!

"Squirrel!"

Flintlock Tom wrote:Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".

+1

And did "Miller's Blood" get finished?

Not really. I did re-attach the added stuff to the ending. But I really needed to cleanup and re-do the ending. But that was about the time I started writing [strike]Time Suck[/strike] err I mean Alone.

But what do you think of the premise? Two headed Ogre that fights with itself, Orks, Gnolls, and Goblins as the good guys with rampaging bandit Elves.

I'm on board, theives who don't like bacon need to be hunted down.

Did someone say "Ogre"?

Cybrludite wrote:Did someone say "Ogre"?

Heh. That variant had crossed my mind.

I was actually thinking something more along the lines of this...



No I don't play WoW