Years ago in another life, (Junior High?) I wrote a short story for a creative writing class called "Ogre Here, Ogre There, Ogre Everywhere." I should try and find it. Anyway it was about a two headed Ogre and had some magic mixed with hack and slash in it. I really don't remember that much about it but after reading Khorne's fantasy story on WeTheArmed.com whose protagonist is a Naga (Medusa) I decided to resurrect this story.
Ogre Chapter 1
Enjoy. Oh I really want feedback on this one seeing as its a complete departure from anything else I've posted before.
Ogre Here Ogre There
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moose42
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Ogre Here Ogre There
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Flintlock Tom
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".
If time, chance and random process can produce a platypus why not an ammo tree?
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moose42
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
What can I say I've got ADD, hey look a quarter! What were we talking about?Flintlock Tom wrote:Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".
Oh yes, I needed a break from Alone for a bit, and ohh did you mention "A Girl and Her Bot?" Man I need to work on that one some more too. No! Must RESIST. Must FINISH Alone!
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
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blackeagle603
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
"Squirrel!"
"The Guncounter: More fun than a barrel of tattooed knife-fighting chain-smoking monkey butlers with drinking problems and excessive gambling debts!"
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AZMARK
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
+1Flintlock Tom wrote:Hey! No fair starting a new project when you have us hanging on "Alone" and "A Girl and her bot".
And did "Miller's Blood" get finished?
My favorite story of his ended with "...and so he went out the back door in his bathrobe, flipped the AK to 'Afrikaner', and started hosing the baboons off his tennis court." - Tam
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moose42
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
Not really. I did re-attach the added stuff to the ending. But I really needed to cleanup and re-do the ending. But that was about the time I started writing [strike]Time Suck[/strike] err I mean Alone.But what do you think of the premise? Two headed Ogre that fights with itself, Orks, Gnolls, and Goblins as the good guys with rampaging bandit Elves.
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
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AZMARK
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
I'm on board, theives 
who don't like bacon 
need to be hunted down.
who don't like bacon need to be hunted down.My favorite story of his ended with "...and so he went out the back door in his bathrobe, flipped the AK to 'Afrikaner', and started hosing the baboons off his tennis court." - Tam
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Cybrludite
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
Did someone say "Ogre"?
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randy
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
Heh. That variant had crossed my mind.Cybrludite wrote:Did someone say "Ogre"?
...even before I read MHI, my response to seeing a poster for the stars of the latest Twilight movies was "I see 2 targets and a collaborator".
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moose42
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Re: Ogre Here Ogre There
I was actually thinking something more along the lines of this...
No I don't play WoW
No I don't play WoW
Years from now our children and grandchildren living in a 3rd world America will ask "What were you doing on March 21st 2010 and why didn't you stop it?"
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One
--Me
Come check out my blog where I share my crazy sci-fi and fantasy fiction.
Alone: King of One