"Alone" Synopsis by Moose42

[moose42]

Chapter 6 part 2 enjoy.

I've also started a new project entitled "A Girl and Her Bot." First chapter to come sometime later this week. I stole the idea from an episode of Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone complex.

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[AZMARK]

Little girls with big machineguns, what a strange world we were living in

And, we've just solved the cover art dilema...

[Aaron]

Little girls with big machineguns, what a strange world we were living in

And, we've just solved the cover art dilema...

AZMARK FTW!!

Seriously, I'd love to see this get published. Being honest, yeah the story could use a bit a polish, but that's true of all stories and usually something for an editor to fix.

You're certainly an enjoyable and creative author. I say go for it.

[moose42]

Oops posted in the wrong spot.

I was trying to post this, A Girl and Her Bot

[moose42]

Here you guys go. More weirdness.

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[Flintlock Tom]

Better and better.

[moose42]

Better and better.

Thanks, I am enjoying this story. I am glad some others are too.
It's fun being the complete master of the story vs dabbling in somebodies sandbox.

Chapter 8 is up enjoy.

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[moose42]

I decided to mess around and work on the cover. After a bit of photoshopping this is what I came up with.

So what do ya think? ;D



Click on it to view big.

[Precision]

With it being a shadow, it is very difficult to determine if he has his finger properly indexed and NOT on the trigger. but other than that, I like it.

Personally I would darken the shadow so that less of the background bleeds through, but I like it.

Goldie manning the ma duece with furball wide eyed at her side might be good too. (shameslessly stolen from AZMARK)

[moose42]

I think it might be a tad bit too transparent too. But with the magic of Photoshop it can be changed.

My finger was definitely not on the trigger its kinda hard to see but you can make out the curve of the trigger.

Yes the silhouette is me. Wouldn't that make me an internet model now?

Oh should the silhouette be transparent or not?